เตรียมสอบ IELTS Exam: Writing TASK II Sport Class Topic

Posted on มีนาคม 30, 2012 by Staff

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ตัวอย่างงานเขียน IELTS Essay หัวข้อ sport classes ค่ะ

วันนี้พี่นำอีกไอเดียหนึ่งมาฝากกันค่ะ ลองมาดูนะคะว่าเป็นอย่างไรกันบ้างแล้วมีจุดควรแก้ไขอย่างไร ตามมาดูกันเลยดีกว่าค่ะ

In order to keep the students more focused, the sports classes should be stopped in high school. Do you think this will be a right approach for a better generation?

At present, it is argued that a secondary school should hold back the physical education curriculum so as to keep students successful in learning. In contrast, others think that, the sports subjects, they would help students more beneficial in their life. However, I agree with this ideas which this essay will be examine and my opinion will be provided.

With respect in this issue, it is abelief that a majority of students feel delightful and enjoyable in the sports classes, others say that they do love this subject more than another subjects in their schedule. For the reason, why the physical course should be continued in the curriculum not only high school but also added this course in every level. Due to, this course would help pupils build a good foundation in life.

Moreover, the sports classes would help students get a better health and better life. For example, if pupils spend their hobby time playing sports, they will get physical strength, balance body, which leading to a good mental health and having a disease-free bodyas well.

In addition, focusing on youth ages today, they spend most of times after finishing learning with tutorial special subjects such as math, science. As a result of lacking leisure time and not taking care their body.

Due to this issue, many students have an obesity and overweigh which both of disease are caused from consuming more sugar food such as junk food in daily life. In the same time, they do not exercise.

Regarding playing sports issue, many people say thatlearning correctly rule would help the players understand in game better and protect themselves when attaching harmful situation.

In sum, it is clearly identified that sports are like as the best medicine, they can help their physical body, a good mental. Moreover, the student will have a good virtue, understanding discipline and having the will each other. On the other hand, the teacher should teach students to separate times correctly and suggest them know what they should do in order to get a better quality in life.

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เฉลย IELTS Essay: the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Posted on มีนาคม 25, 2012 by Staff

มาพบกันเฉลยของตอนที่แล้วกันค่ะ มีหลายประเด็นเลยค่ะที่เราน่าลองศึกษากันดู

IELTS Essay Topic: the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?  –> You must answer this directly!!

What other measures do you think might be effective?

At present day, many capitals of countries, such as Bangkok, encounter time-consuming traffic jams and excessive pollution. Many people think that increasing the cost of oil is the best idea to decrease those problems; nevertheless, others believe that it is not the best choice. This essay will show you the other ways to resolve those problems.

One view is that the cost of oil which rises does not stop the problem of ever growing traffic. Every day, especially in the capital, working societies rely on the speed, not only travelling but also transporting goods. Sometimes, the public transportation does not serve their needs; as a result, many companies have private messengers or drivers for themselves. Although the price of petrol can rise, many people prefer to use private transportation more than using public option.

With respect to air pollution, some people think that the pollution problem does not only occur from the only use of vehicles. It may come from other factors, for instance, coal industry or some chemicals from the electrical equipment. Even if one were not to use their private vehicles, the world would inevitably get more polluted.

Many people believe that there will be another choice to deal with these problems, and it is the development of public transportation. Some capitals, for example, Bangkok, have poor the public transportation. Buses and boats are not well organized for people because they come too late and drivers drive without a schedule; it may cause the accidents. Moreover, the postal system is very slowly. It may require 2-3 days for sending a letter in the same province. If the government turns to improve the public transportation to be better than present, in the way which shows that people can control the time which used to commute safely, people will want to use the public transportation. Consequently, the needs to use vehicles will be reduced, and the pollution will also decline.

very good development of ideas

I strongly believe that increasing the price of petrol is a good choice to cope with growing traffic and pollution problems; on the other hand, improving the public transportation is another logical way to resolve these problems.

Estimate IELTS band score 6.5

IELTS Examiner’s Comments: The essay is well-written and has the hallmarks of a Band 6 but you could have done better in two ways. First, make sure that you directly address the questions asked of you, and you should provide examples and support in all paragraphs in the body! (see 2nd body paragraph) You have a lot of modal verbs and I suggest you include past tenses to back up your ideas. There are some minor errors but you’ve done well in the aspect of trying to vary your structures. Keep up good word and expand on content.

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IELTS Essay Topic: the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Posted on มีนาคม 21, 2012 by Staff

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เอาล่ะค่ะมาฝึกเขียน IELTS Essay กันดีกว่าค่ะ วันนี้พบกับ IELTS Writing Task II หัวข้อด้านล่างเลยค่ะ

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other measures do you think might be effective?

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At present day, many capitals of countries, such as Bangkok, encounter with the traffic jam and pollution. Many people think that increasing the cost of oil is the best idea to decrease those problems; nevertheless, others believe that it is not the best choice. This essay will show you the other ways to resolve those problems.

One views that the cost of oil which rises does not stop the problem about traffic. Every day, especially in the capital, working societies rely on the speed not only travelling but also sending things. Sometimes, the public transportation does not serve their needs; as a result, many companies have private messengers or drivers for themselves. Although the price of petrol will be risen, many people prefer to use private transportation more than use the public.

Besides, some people think that a pollution problem does not occur from the only use of vehicles. It may come from other factors, for instance, coal industry or some chemistries form the electrical equipment. Even if they do not use their private vehicles, the world will inevitably get more pollutant.

Many people believe that there will be another choice to deal with these problems, and it is that developing the public transportation. Some capitals, for example, Bangkok, have poor the public transportation. Buses and boats are not well organized for people because they come too late and drivers drive so fast. It may cause the accident.  Moreover, a post system is very slowly. It may spend 2-3 days for sending letter in the same province. If the government turns to improve the public transportation to be better than present, in the way which shows that people can control the time which use to travel and it is safely, people will want to use the public transportation. Consequently, the needs to use vehicles will be reduced, and the pollution will also decline.

I strongly believe that increasing the price of petrol is the good choice to cope with growing traffic and pollution problems; on the other hand, improving the public transportation is another nice way to resolve these problems.

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เฉลย ielts writing หัวข้อ greedy and selfish

Posted on มีนาคม 17, 2012 by Staff

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Reference: ตัวอย่างงานเขียน ielts writing หัวข้อ greedy and selfish

In today’s world, humanity is considered to have grown more and more greedy and selfish. Some people are of the opinion that we should go back to traditional values and show respect for family and community. Personally, I believe that this can yield a myriad of benefits in the long run. There are several reasons in favour of the idea that society should return to traditional values to gain advantages for all in this essay.

It is generally believed that the value of traditional are the principal conformities generated from and for community members who live in society. As a result, this brings a peace and happiness to everyone. For instance, each country has custom or activities to encourage or persuade the one’s attitude to focus on a same goal: unity in society.

This activity tightens the social relationships and contributes a value respected for families and local communities to everyone engaged in it. Therefore, if ones are far away from this value, they are probably be selfish.

According to those reasons, selfish and greedy people living alone and having a tough routine job tend to lose interaction with family and society. In that circumstance, it spawns individualism. It is certainly true that by returning to old and traditional value those individualists will feel their lives are better. For example, when one lives in a family, they have to adapt themselves with value, such as sympathy, respect to others, giving and forgiveness. On account of this, self-interested people may use this benefit for teaching themselves to be less greedy and finding their own happiness in their routine lives. Moreover, when individuals reach a level of peace they will definitely feel about stability in life and love, so they wouldn’t become greedy.

With all things considered, the more the valuable traditions people have, the less selfish they are therefore, I believe in large extent that to reduce a greediness, people should go back to original social values and respect one’s family and local community.

IELTS Examiner’s Comments:

Your level of writing is good but you have to try and catch some of your simple spelling errors when you can. Also, develop and support your ideas with examples from your life (ie. in past tense). Having said that, you have included some good vocab (be careful not to rephrase repeatedly). How about adding a quotation/quote from someone next time for some style points? Good  effort!

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ตัวอย่างงานเขียน ielts writing หัวข้อ greedy and selfish

Posted on มีนาคม 13, 2012 by Staff

สวัสดีค่ะ น้องๆทุกคน วันนี้ก็เข้าสู่ช่วงกลางเดือนมีนาคมกันแล้วนะคะ น้องๆหลายคนน่าจะอยู่ในช่วงที่กำลังเตรียมตัวก่อนสอบ IELTS รอบสุดท้าย เพื่อยื่นคะแนนให้ทันช่วงเดือนพฤษภาคม พี่ๆขอเอาใจช่วยให้ทุกคนผ่านการสอบครั้งนี้ไปได้ด้วยค่ะ

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Nowadays men are becoming more and more greedy and selfish. We should return to older, traditional values and show respect for family and real community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

เป็นไงคะ เคยลองเขียนกันบ้างรึยัง?? ถ้ายังมาลองจับเวลาเขียนกันเลยค่ะ

In today’s world humanity is considered more and more greedy and selfish. Some people are of the opinion that we should go back to traditional values and show respect for family and community. Personally, I believe that this can yield a myriad of benefits in the long run. There are several reasons in favour of the idea that society should return to traditional values to gain advantage in this essay.

Generally believe that, the value of traditional is the principal generated from and for community members who live in society. As a result, this brings a peace and happiness to everyone. For instance, each country has custom or activities to encourage or persuade the one’s attitude for focusing on a same thing, unity in society.

this activity tightens the social relationship and contribute a value respected for familys and local communities to everyone engaged with it. Therefore, if ones are far away from this value, they are probably be selfish.

According to those reasons, selfish and greedy people living alone and having tough routinely job tend to lose interaction with family and society. By that circumstance, those become individualism. It is certainly true that, returning to old and traditional value those idividualists will feel their lifes are better. For example, when ones live in family, they have to adapt themselves with value, such as sympathy, respect to others, giving and forgiveness. On account to this, self-interested people may use this benefit for teaching themselve to be less greedy and finding their own happiness in their routine lifes. Moreover, when individuals reach a peace they will definitely feel about stability of lifes and love, so they wouldn’t become greedy.

With all things considered, the more the valuable tradition people have, the less selfish they are therefore, I believe in a large extent that to reduce a greediness people should go back to social original values and respect for family and local community.

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